Feedback

Below is one of the feedback sheet that we received after our audience viewed our film. Overall the comment where mostly positive but we did get some criticism. The buzz of the title sequence was generally good so I believe that we got our demographic correct.

Journal: 21/02/12

In today's lesson, it was our first screening to our class. We where given the opportunity to show our first cut of our title sequence to our demographic audience. This is the first time we have shown or work so it was a nerve racking experience. The aim of this task was to make sure we new what needed tweaking, to enable use to get a highest grade as possible. The feedback from this task was very positive from both the target audience and also the class. My teacher said that the titles, typography and design where 'excellent', music track and performance where really good. The students comment where also good. Some said it had 'good pace' and also 'good use of diegtic sound'. Overall we where happy with this feedback but there where some improvements to be made. The initial music was to sinister for the film and did not quite work. Also the voice volume needs adjusting. Apart from that we need to shorten the film too. These are whet we need to do to improve our title sequence